I pasted the text of the Declaration of Independence. Boy was that fun...
9 of 46 sentences are hard to read.
19 of 46 sentences are very hard to read.
12 adverbs. Aim for 11 or less.
8 words or phrases can be simpler.
12 uses of passive voice. Aim for 9 or less.
I was thinking about giving some Joyce a pass through this...