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lbr on Nov 28, 2013 | parent | context | favorite | on: I'm a 16 year old HS student - Feedback on my firs...

Great stuff. Biggest issue I have is the "about section" is way too long. A huge block of text is tough to get through - it's not inviting. ALSO think a photo of you would make it more personal.ALSO I'd put a few sub points under each bullet in "work experience" ALSO I'd center the three projects in the "projects" section. Overall, great job. For more thoughts - feel free to check out my site - LoganRandolph.com

lbr on Nov 28, 2013 [–]

and I know you asked for design/engineering advice - But thought content stuff could be helpful too.

pandringa on Nov 28, 2013 | [–]

No, thats awesome advice! Thanks!

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