It is not wrong. To make matters worse you'd need to look at the history books to better appreciate what indeed actually is "groundbreaking tech" and how it evolves. Science and technology is nudged along with micro breakthroughs. The history books are full of what appear to be big breakthroughs but when you look past the surface you'll discover how they really happen. Your experience of VC firms appears to be very limited, I'm guessing though you were top in your class (probably two years ago), and now think when you say something, it automatically becomes "the word".
If your points are strong, they don't need to be covered in barbs. Barbs are a "tell"; they indicate bluster, which is what people deploy when they don't know that they're talking about. You're making it harder to take you seriously and should change your tactics.
