This looks incredibly useful and well designed. I've shown my CEO; perhaps we'll be incorporating Streak soon. Two copy niggles:
"Streak is great for sales, but did you know you can also use it for: hiring candidates, handling email support, organizing dealflow, fundraising and organizing your personal projects."
This is a question - add a question mark to the end (bonus, invented by Dr. Evil)
"We put indicators right in your inbox to show you which emails have to do with which deals you are working on."
Awkward / run-on. Try - We added email indicators showing you the association to the deals on which you are working. (remove the wordy noun modifiers and prepositional phrases)
"Streak is great for sales, but did you know you can also use it for: hiring candidates, handling email support, organizing dealflow, fundraising and organizing your personal projects."
This is a question - add a question mark to the end (bonus, invented by Dr. Evil)
"We put indicators right in your inbox to show you which emails have to do with which deals you are working on."
Awkward / run-on. Try - We added email indicators showing you the association to the deals on which you are working. (remove the wordy noun modifiers and prepositional phrases)