I agree. That should be the "pitch" in the marketing copy. Something like "I got frustrated with Trello, Asana, etc. so I decided to fix it" and build the narrative from there.

To the OP: this is extremely well done. Congrats on launching. Love the design and the packaging.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feedback. I must admit that we're not good at copywriting. I'm so happy that I received a lot of great ideas from the comments here.

Thanks for your feedback. Probably on our website, we're trying to sound "smart" with fancy words. We'll work on the copy to make it more clear.

And for me it's quite the contrary - the description on HN says nothing about how it actually works, it looks just like whining and flaming and bragging.