This is a silly game, you mispelt "intelligible". The missing comma is well spotted and down to my lack of proofreading, the comma splice is more stylistic than anything in my view.
However, by concentrating on how I wrote, rather than what I wrote, you are reinforcing my view that "loose-yet-intelligible" is not OK. You provided further reinforcement by writing a clumsy sentence which you then felt the need to justify.
However, by concentrating on how I wrote, rather than what I wrote, you are reinforcing my view that "loose-yet-intelligible" is not OK. You provided further reinforcement by writing a clumsy sentence which you then felt the need to justify.