Awkward. Let's reorder and compare them (differences are in italics):
1) “I welcome Google's commitment to defending Android and its partners.”
2) “We welcome Google's commitment to defending Android and its partners.”
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3) “We welcome today's news, which demonstrates Google’s deep commitment to defending Android, its partners, and the ecosystem.”
4) “We welcome the news of today's acquisition, which demonstrates that Google is deeply committed to defending Android, its partners, and the entire ecosystem.”
So we're buying Motorola. We need a short statement from each of you for our press release tomorrow morning. Please restate the following in your own words for our press release (1-2 sentences max):
We welcome this acquisition that demonstrates Google's deep commitment to defending Android, it's partners and the ecosystem.
Try and limit yourself to 1 or 2 sentences. Our team has a couple of examples attached, first come first served and no exact duplicates please, that would be awkward. I think it goes without saying that this is a stop ship issue.
1) “I welcome Google's commitment to defending Android and its partners.”
2) “We welcome Google's commitment to defending Android and its partners.”
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3) “We welcome today's news, which demonstrates Google’s deep commitment to defending Android, its partners, and the ecosystem.”
4) “We welcome the news of today's acquisition, which demonstrates that Google is deeply committed to defending Android, its partners, and the entire ecosystem.”