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Your copy needs work. Most importantly, you need to state what Spreedly Core is before the vague marketing gobbet. Even,

"Spreedly Core is <5-10 word description>. // With Spreedly Core you can focus on who you want to charge when, and we'll take care of the rest. [...]"




Our copy needs so much work. Wasn't really counting on hitting the front page of Hacker News today...

Good call on having the pithy 5-10 word description - that's on my short list now.




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