It sounds beautiful. I guess part of us wants to continue to exist, even after our death. I must point out, as much as I agree with the sentiment, many people give up a happy life on earth (forbidden food, no premarital sex, tithes etc..) for the sake of religion.
I like how the dying subject of the thread has already asked you to take this elsewhere and you are ignoring his wishes just to proselytize your belief system.
How ironically selfish of you. (Which I don't think you intended, but...)
