I liked it. However, I'm not going to forward it since it will confuse people who don't have the background to disambiguate.

For example, who is "you" in the following two bullet points:

  It is not 'secure' as the Coke recipe is secure.
  Coca Cola has the key to its vault, but you don’t
  have the key to yours.

  It is not “secure” as the Pentagon is secure. Those
  blueprints are closely guarded, but your plans — even
  much of your security code — are known to all.